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Personal Statement is the most important factor of your application.

The number of applicants for universities in the UK is increasing. Personal Statement is the only way you could distinguish yourself. Don’t throw it away!

We examine your Personal Statement comprehensively.

We pay attention to:

The language

Grammar. Use of the tenses. Orthography. Punctuation. Literal errors.

Diction

Repetitions. Splitting the text into introduction, body, and conclusion. Enthusiasm.

Coherence

Logic. Lack of contradiction in terms. Accordance with your field of study.

Transparency

Transparency for native speakers. First impression.

Compactness

The length. Unnecessary information. Cliche - general statements.

Efficacy

Authenticity. Accenting your assets, achievements, involvement.

Personal Statements Examples

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Personal Statement for UCL Read!
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Personal Statement for Oxford Read!

This is what our job is:

I must to explain economic issues in the easiest way to help my students understand them. I have learned how to simplify the complexity of economical schemes and illustrate them by examples from historical and current political situation.
I must be able to explain economics succinctly and clearly to make sure my students understand it. Thus I learned to illustrate otherwise convoluted phenomena using examples from history and current political situation.
When I eat out with the boy I always go dutch. If I didn’t because of social customs, I would have to reciprocate, but as a man, he possibly wouldn’t be eager to eat dishes bought by me.
When I eat out with a boy, I always go Dutch. If I didn’t because of social customs, I would feel compelled to reciprocate. But as a man, he possibly wouldn’t be interested to eat dishes bought by me.
I also experienced that perseverance and enthusiasm is a key factor for change.
It is my belief that your degree is a great opportunity for me to develop my interest, and also a challenge.
I also experienced that perseverance and enthusiasm are key factors for change. Your university would give me a great opportunity to develop my interests while also presenting an intellectual challenge.
This project enabled me to develop my organisational skills as well as being rewarding and fulfilling.
This project enabled me to develop my organisational skills and was rewarding and fulfilling.
xbservation made me curious about women’s genesis and I read Simone de Beauvoir’s “The second sex” which helped me to understand the genesis of the current women’s situation.
This observation made me curious about women’s nature, so I have read Simone de Beauvoir’s “The Second Sex”, which allowed me to understand the genesis of the current women’s situation.
Economics is not included in the Polish education program, so I had to learn with a group of students of my age. The first thing which struck me was the lack of girls in the circle.
Economics is not part of the Poland’s high school curriculum, so we had to self-study the discipline. It struck me how few girls there were in the circle.
Besides getting more familiar with global politics, it allowed me to notice how often China is mentioned in those programmes. I saw how important is this country now with its second-biggest economy in the world and widespread external policy
Besides helping me become more familiar with global politics, the book allowed me to better understand the rising importance of China as the second-biggest economy in the world and its widespread external policy.
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  • Your Personal Statement will be checked by a professional academic proofreader and native speaker
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  • we add substantive comments about the content
  • we add information on how to arrange paragraphs so that they show a coherent story
  • We mark which parts are worth developing and which are better to shorten
  • we suggest what you can add
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  • Your Personal Statement will be checked by a professional academic proofreader and native speaker
  • we check the grammar
  • we improve spelling and punctuation
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  • we check the language style
  • we correct the typos
  • also
  • we add substantive comments about the content
  • we add information on how to arrange paragraphs so that they show a coherent story
  • we mark which parts are worth developing and which are better to shorten
  • we suggest what you can add
  • we will evaluate the impression your personal statement makes after being read by objective critics
  • everything that is in the Gold Package
  • also
  • You will receive a comment on your Personal Statement from Oxford, Cambridge or LSE student
  • Two qualified persons will check your Personal Statement
  • one of them will be a student of Oxford, Cambridge or LSE
  • 2 checks of your Personal Statement are included in the package. Learn more

Frequently Asked Questions

Who is reviewing my Personal Statement?

Your Personal Statement will be reviewed by a native English speaker and by a professional proofreader, who specializes in the correction of academic texts. In our Diamond Package your work will be also read and commented by a person who studies at Oxford, Cambridge or LSE.

How long does it take to review?

Depending on the package, up to 72 hours. By this time you would have gotten your reviewed Personal Statement via e-mail. We usually mark your Personal Statement much faster, on average it takes us 21 hours.

Will you check my Personal 3 hours before the deadline?

Before the most important application deadlines we stay longer in our office. We accept your Personal Statement as long as the number of checked essays doesn’t reach the limit. If we will not make it in time, you will get a full refund.

Can you guarantee that my Personal Statement will be accepted?

No. We don’t lie and try to change the reality. We build on your true achievements and try to make them distinguish from the others. However, we are not miracle workers.

How can I contact you?

Send an e-mail to: personalstatement@lagunita.education of call us: +48 531 60 60 03 (Mon. - Fri.; 9.00 am to 6.00 pm)

Why you should show your Personal Statement to 3 (or even 5) people?

Three (or even 5) heads are better than one. Even the most perceptive linguist may not notice a mistake after 15 reviews. Additionally, no one is going to mark your Personal as well as a person who successfully applied to a university in UK.

How will you review my Personal?

We make changes based on 21 criteria, which you will find on our main site. In a text file provided by you, we will make changes in the text and add comments to some passages. In this way, each of the remarks you may accept, discard or only take it as a suggestion.

What happens to my Personal after the review?

We remove it from our system and our computers. In this way, we care about the security of your personal details.

How does a reviewed Personal Statement look like?

You will obtain your reviewed Personal Statement in PDF and TXT forms. If you prefer, we may send you a Google Docs link with your Personal Statement, which will be changed into the suggestion mode. Let us know about your preferences in the e-mail. Some of the remarks will be added to particular sentences or passages. There also may be inserted some alternative forms of writing your passage or a sentence. In the Golden and Diamond Package at the end of the file you will find a comprehensive comment about the impression of your work. It will help you see how you present yourself in your Personal Statement in the eyes of a third person.

How does the cooperation look in the Diamond Package?

In the Diamond Package you can send your work twice. The first version of your Personal Statement will be read by a student from Oxford, Cambridge or LSE, and they will give you specific details about the impressions your work has made on them. They will also suggest the passages that you should extend or shorten, and how you can rehabilitate your message in order to make a better impression on the Admission Office.

For the next 14 days you will have time to implement the changes in our system. We kindly ask you to send a new version to: personalstatement@lagunita.education

The second version of your work will be marked by a professional proofreader, a graduate of the Linguistic Studies and an English native speaker. In this step the language of your Personal Statement should be improved. By 48 hours you will get a file with all the adjustments, comments, and a note with the description of the impression you have made in the reader.

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